Taster Progress Report

Just thought you guys would like to see this. Ive been making this comic for free, the story, the character, the scenario is all done for free. The only thing thats been only part that require money in this story is how much weight she gains. I know for a fact my commission are not cheap and I don't do any free art (especially on the dirty things). But I had felt that I been doing less art these days since im tackling three jobs at one and barely create any time to work at all. I hoe you guys enjoy it.

What are your thoughts on this comic? Am I improving on the quality of a simple job? how is my narration skills doing? Am I making any progress on grammatical errors? do you guys like the characters, is Jeff, and Umi good side characters? should I do something different with them, or make more charcters? Tell me your thoughts?

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or if you want to see Laurie Palmer get fatter. send some money here. 1 dollar equals one pound.


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you guys are also missing page 23, it cost 2 dollar to see, it will also make her gain 2 pounds.

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